I’m a pretty nice person, overall. I don’t love or hate much with great passion. I believe everyone is entitled to their own opinion, can follow whatever religion they want, and that women should have equal rights. However, there is one word in the English language that drives me absolutely insane:

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My students know my cannon is “get this word out of your vocabulary,” and you’ve probably heard this time and again from every writing professor, editor, or colleague you have contacted. It’s true in academics that the word is despised, but why? I’ve already used this word several times in this post. But let me tell you…

I HATE this word. 

I’ve hated it for a long time. Years ago, my college professor once asked my class, “When we use the word you, it disrupts our communication by accusing the other person. What do we do when we are accused?”

The class had a variety of options: react, get angry, flee, hide. 

The most profound words I ever heard from this professor: “We feel punished. Humanity will do anything to avoid punishment. So what should we do next time we want to accuse?”

The class had no answer.

“Instead of accusing, ask: ‘will this ever happen again?’ If the answer is yes, the relationship is dissolved. If it is no, then communication can be restored.”

Ten years later, these words still impact me, especially when we are tempted to accuse. It starts innocently enough, in good advice disguised as a backhanded slap: “Have you tried … maybe you should …” Though it sounds nice, it’s really not. It’s a projection of what someone thinks YOU should do, and at some deep personal level, we feel punished for not doing that thing. We react, we explode, we flee, we hide.

So among the most powerful words in English: you. 

Because even though we may not be aware that it’s a damaging, punishing word, it’s also the best word people can hear:

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This use of you means there is hope at the end of this accusatory tunnel. We can change. When we want to offer advice, or even in the heat of the moment when decorum dictates we must ask for an explanation, think about that little word you. 

How would the situation change, if only a moment is spared to use the word instead? 

How would our lives improve if we took responsibility for our actions and offered our experiences, all by using the infamous first-person pronoun? We can soften the blow, we can help others, and we can provide support they need, without administering punishment.

I still hate this word, but now I know how to use it. I can only hope the same for some of… well, nevermind.




2 thoughts on “You

  1. First of all I want to say great blog! I had a quick question that I’d like to
    ask if you don’t mind. I was interested to know how you center yourself and clear your thoughts before writing.
    I have had trouble clearing my mind in getting my thoughts out there.

    I truly do enjoy writing but it just seems like the first 10 to 15 minutes are lost just trying to figure out how to begin. Any suggestions or
    hints? Thanks!


    1. It can be so hard to focus when sitting down to write! I find that consistency, quiet, and music, are all helpful. I get up at the same time every day (around 4am) and write in the quiet before anyone else wakes up. I also have to listen to music – some days it’s rain sounds, others it’s some Metallica, it just depends on the scene and genre I’m writing. May I also suggest a brief outline of where you want the chapter to go. It doesn’t have to be more than a few sentences. This helps me stay focused without having the daunting pressure of a huge outline. I hope this helps and I wish you the best of luck on your writing journey!


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